ADVANCE READER TEAM

SLAVE: The Ghost of Cambria - Book Two

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Which version of the book did you choose to download?

E-Pub (Apple Books, Kobo, Nook)

MOBI (Kindle)

PDF (Web Browser)

Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? Why not?

Could you relate to Kristen Cole? When did you empathize with her pain or excitement?

When I read the last two sentences of the cliff-hanger ending, I thought:

This miserable writer killed the dog... the best dog in the whole world... and he deserves every one-star review he gets. *spits on the ground*

Penelope is injured, and maybe unconsious, but she's going to be just fine. In fact, she will be in perfect health by the end of the next book. Even if winter is coming for Kristen, this is not a George R. R. Martin story, and Penelope will walk away safe and sound specifically because she's a dog and such a good girl.

Was there a point at which you felt the story lagged or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly?

Were there any parts that confused you? Or even frustrated or annoyed you? Which parts, and why?

What is your favorite part of this book?

Is there anything else you'd like to tell me about your experience with this book?

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If you found typos along the way and were able to mark them in your e-reader, please email screenshots to josephstoneauthor@icloud.com Thank you for your help. ❤︎